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NaNoBlog 2002 |
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![]() I think NaNoWriMo is one of the most liberating & empowering things I have done for myself, and am so glad I did it! I was already getting into a habit of regular writing (which helped), but I am sure if I hadn't done NaNo, I still wouldn't be much further along on my other writing projects, and wouldn't have any of this novel, either. Now I'm a whole novel ahead of where I would have been. I have proved to myself I can sit down and make myself write even when I don't feel like writing or don't think I have anything to say, and that I can make myself push forward instead of agonizing about getting it all out perfectly before I move on. I have also proved to myself that I can occasionally finish something I start! My NaNo novel is about the seventh novel I've started in the past 10-12 years, and the first one I've gotten past 7,000 words on. That feels good! But even though I meant to put it out of my head now & let it sit for a while before even reading it again, much less revising it, I can't get it out of my head yet. I still find myself thinking about it and what's wrong with it all the time, and last night I even sat up in bed & turned on the nightlight to jot some notes about things I need to flesh out, & even a snippet of actual text to add. Some of the problems I've noted are: * not enough happens--it's too much dialogue & not enough action * not enough is at stake--the character doesn't like her life as it is, so making it worse isn't a big enough threat to her * the main character isn't likable enough--she has no real interests, & I don't know why the other characters would like her or why the reader would care about her story * I have her trying to meet people from the Internet but never mention security concerns (which I meant to, but then overlooked) * I need to research hair dye & henna tattoos * I need to figure out what size town she lives in & where it is * having a character spout platitudes that help set the main character straight is pathetic * I need to research the musical The Music Man, which she supposedly performed in & I know next to nothing about...or else choose a different show * the character needs more development in terms of what she was like as a child--I want to show that although she had more friends in childhood than she does now, she was always a bit of a loner even before some difficult experiences made her withdraw more from other people Most of those are not easy fixes, so I expect the revision process to be much longer and more painful than the writing process, but I also don't plan to undertake a major revison until at least January, if not later! I have another whole novel I want to write now, and then a short children's chapter book I would like to write. The latter should only be about 20K, and seems like it will be pretty easy and fun, after writing 58K words! posted by Alison | 9:07 AM
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